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I shove this poem
right in your face!
Make you see.
Make you taste.

Taste the bitterness
of these wounds.
See the emptiness
and all it consumes.

I shove your words
right back at you.
Let you hear
your own untruths.

Push me away,
I'll give you a shove.
Make you feel the pain
you've given enough of.

Call me names.
I'll curse you back!
I'll play your game,
get you off track.

Taunt and tease me
if you dare.
I'll show you how it feels
to no longer care.

Don't bother to catch me
when you fall.
Soon you'll become something
that was nothing at all.

You don't deserve
an ounce of my tears!
You're not worth
these wasted years!

Tell me I'm weak.
I'll tell you more!
Soon you'll know defeat
as I even the score.

You spoon-fed me
all of your lies.
I spit them back!
and bid you a sleepless night.

This poem goes out
to those who inspire.
Thanks for the hate
you helped transpire!

One day you'll look me in the face
and I'll look into yours.
You'll say I'm a disgrace.
I'll say you got what you deserve!
©2004-2009 ~DorothyJ
:icondorothyj:

Author's Comments

This is an angry poem. I don't know if it's gonna make as much sense to you as it does me, but then again, when does anger make much sense?

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:iconrustingsoul:
omg! yes! its even better than i would of imagined! its perfect!
sad & angry... but perfect to fit everything we've been talking about!
cheers to u on a fucking awesome poem! :w00t:
::adding to favs::
:iconarthman:
D--
Well, I don't know who this is about (though I have an idea), but I hope that I don't inspire this kind of hostility. If I do, please let me know. Its not my intention to make you angry, ever!

Arthman

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"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden
:icondorothyj:
That's just it. This poem isn't to any one person, it's to all who inspired those feelings ever. No, you haven't made me mad yet, don't worry. I still love you!

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The only person worth your tears would never make you cry...
:icondorothyj:
Thank You! Thanks for the fav rating also! Yeah, I actually started it on my lunch break from work last night. I was wanting to add more to it, but when I did, it started to lose its effect. So I thought, why ruin what I already have? Thanks for the awesome comment, not to mention reading. I'm off to read your stuff now!

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The only person worth your tears would never make you cry...
:iconarthman:
D--
Alright! Andy's in the clear! WOO-HOO!

Arthman

--
"It's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything." - Tyler Durden
:iconjstermn:
anger...

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"If you could be any better than you are right now...you would be"
:icondorothyj:
....and I was hoping no one would be able to tell. that obvious huh?
:iconjstermn:
:)

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"If you could be any better than you are right now...you would be"

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